Band 9 model answer
In a number of nations, the authorities decide what journalists may publish or broadcast. Although defenders insist such control protects society, I am convinced that the disadvantages of state censorship far outweigh any benefits it may bring.
The supposed advantages are not entirely without merit. Restricting the media can, in principle, prevent the spread of dangerous misinformation, shield national security secrets and curb content that incites hatred or panic during a crisis. Governments also argue that censorship preserves social harmony by suppressing material likely to inflame ethnic or religious tensions. In limited and well-defined situations, these protections sound reasonable.
The drawbacks, however, are far graver and harder to contain. A press controlled by the state ceases to perform its essential function of scrutinising those in power, allowing corruption and incompetence to flourish unchallenged. Once officials can decide what counts as harmful, the same machinery is readily turned against legitimate criticism, so that censorship intended to protect the public ends up protecting the rulers instead. Citizens deprived of accurate information cannot make informed decisions at the ballot box, hollowing out democracy itself. History shows that controlled media swiftly degenerates into propaganda.
Weighing these considerations, the balance tips decisively against censorship. The narrow gains of suppressing misinformation are dwarfed by the loss of accountability, the erosion of public trust and the ever-present temptation for governments to silence dissent. A free, responsible press, supported by independent regulation rather than state control, achieves the legitimate aims of censorship without surrendering the scrutiny on which open societies depend. For these reasons, the disadvantages clearly prevail.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the writer concedes limited advantages yet argues firmly that disadvantages 'far outweigh' them, fully addressing the outweigh question with a sustained position.
- Lexical Resource: media and political terminology such as 'misinformation', 'propaganda', 'scrutinising those in power' and 'independent regulation' is precise and idiomatic.
- Coherence and Cohesion: a clear concession-then-rebuttal structure ('The supposed advantages ...', 'The drawbacks, however ...') makes the line of reasoning easy to follow.