Band 9 model answer
As conflict and persecution displace ever more people, the question of how many refugees prosperous nations should welcome has become bitterly divisive. Some insist that wealth confers an obligation to shelter the desperate, whereas others fear the strain this imposes. In my view, rich countries should accept more refugees, while managing the process responsibly.
Those urging greater generosity appeal to both morality and capacity. They argue that nations enjoying peace and prosperity have a humanitarian duty to protect those fleeing violence, particularly where their own foreign policies have contributed to the upheaval. Moreover, wealthy economies are often ageing and short of labour, so newcomers can fill vacancies, pay taxes and enrich society culturally. On this view, accepting refugees is not charity but enlightened self-interest.
The opposing camp emphasises practical limits. Sudden large arrivals can overwhelm housing, schools and health services, fuelling resentment among existing residents who feel their own needs are neglected. Critics also warn of integration difficulties and the political backlash that unmanaged immigration can provoke. For them, compassion must be tempered by an honest assessment of what a society can realistically absorb.
Weighing these concerns, I believe the moral and economic case for acceptance ultimately prevails, provided it is handled with care. Turning away those in genuine peril is indefensible for any nation that values human dignity, yet the practical worries are not imaginary. The answer therefore lies in well-funded, gradual resettlement programmes that share the load internationally and invest seriously in integration. Approached in this manner, welcoming refugees becomes a humane and sustainable policy rather than the unbearable burden its opponents fear.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: both viewpoints are explored thoroughly and a clear, qualified opinion ('should accept more refugees, while managing the process responsibly') is sustained.
- Lexical Resource: migration vocabulary including 'persecution', 'displace', 'resettlement' and 'integration', plus the phrase 'enlightened self-interest', shows topic command.
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: complex constructions such as 'provided it is handled with care' and the participial 'enjoying peace and prosperity' are accurate and varied.