Band 9 model answer
Whereas earlier generations typically devoted their entire working lives to a single employer or trade, it is now common to switch careers repeatedly. In my judgement, the advantages of this newfound mobility outweigh its drawbacks, although the latter deserve serious consideration.
The benefits of changing direction are considerable. Moving between fields exposes people to fresh challenges that keep them engaged and stave off the boredom of decades spent doing the same thing. Each transition broadens a person's skill set, builds adaptability and often leads to better-paid or more fulfilling work than they would have found by standing still. In a fast-changing economy where whole industries can decline within a generation, the ability to reinvent oneself is also a vital form of insurance against obsolescence.
The disadvantages, of course, are not trivial. Frequent moves can interrupt the accumulation of deep expertise that only years in one field produce, and they may unsettle pensions, professional networks and financial stability. Starting afresh repeatedly demands resilience and can prove stressful, particularly for those with families to support.
On balance, however, I am convinced the gains prevail. The losses tend to be temporary and manageable, whereas the rewards, namely adaptability, renewed motivation and resilience against economic upheaval, grow more valuable with every passing year. In a world where the only constant is change, the capacity to embrace new careers is less a liability than a decisive advantage, equipping people to thrive amid uncertainty rather than be left behind by it.
Examiner’s notes
- Task Response: the 'outweigh' question is answered with a firm verdict ('the advantages... outweigh its drawbacks') that is justified by weighing concrete gains against genuine costs.
- Coherence and Cohesion: paragraphs progress from advantages to disadvantages to a reasoned conclusion, linked by 'of course', 'On balance, however' and 'namely', ensuring smooth flow.
- Lexical Resource: well-chosen items such as 'stave off the boredom', 'reinvent oneself', 'obsolescence' and 'economic upheaval' display range and accuracy characteristic of Band 9.